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Responses to Untitled: Chuks Moneke, by writer Philip Mudin
ReplyDeleteResponse 1
Red voodoo moon
reflecting dawn and dusk
thus evolves the masquerade
of sacrifice to maintain control
spiritual cleansing
flickering will into thought
into action
reaction
the power of elements entwined
and focused into fruition.
voices heard of ancestors dancing, laughing, singing
be praised these movements, for obedience is rewarded with good fortune
Response 2
Father, forgive me, for I have evolved.
Not trembling; dancing
not screaming; singing
not falling; ascending.
Becoming one with thought
action
disillusion
revolving reaction
dismissed
buried, trodden down.
Tombstones now gather not dust
nor time
nor cracks of reality
seeping,
smothered out like rational thought upon dreaming.
It sizzles with delight
ReplyDeleteSkin, patterned yet smooth, becomes leathery and wrinkled
The juice oozes, promising soft sweet centre
Little back pips hiss as the flames touch them.
Flesh melts into a sticky mess
Roasting Watermelons over an open fire
Geoff Van Der Hor
body numb
ReplyDeleteeyes shut
my soul lingers through the spirit world in search of answers
Questions unknown
a man walks the path along side me with guidance
where I go, I dont know
but my travells give strength and fruitful wisdom
my body takes movement
time to wake and face the harsh reality of life
My dreams are truth and truth my nightmare
Thabile