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I looked at her for a long time. The first face I saw after the long months of haze cleared. She was tired and laboured. She did not look at me when I started getting colder. She did not look at me when the blood on my skin started clotting. It was only when I had stopped crying that she instantly looked down at me.
ReplyDeleteThe feel of her fingers was the first human touch, the slight warmth and the first smile it bought to me.
He was not there when I was born and I wished he had never come back. His eyes, his voice, his touch haunted me all my life.
And now, as I heard the shrill cry of life, I wanted to look down. I wanted to open my eyes and I wanted to see its face.
But my life held me back. I was afraid to face the sin. The sin to create a life for torture.
Sarwat Maqbool
Touch of death
ReplyDeleteNever knew you to be so cold, so frail and so weak
Your hands used to be so soft, tender and warm.
Your touch was your love travelling from your skin into mine
Your touch always gave me joy. Your touch made my life worth living
Your touch gave me an identity. But now!
As you lay there, with pain and sadness in your eyes.
Your touch has become cold. Your love stops in your eyes. Your touch has become my pain. Your touch has lost me.
Your touch is now gone. I long for it in my heart and soul. I would rather feel lost and pain than to not feel your touch ever again
Thabile Mapisa
Child Soldier
ReplyDeleteBig hand from the shadowlands
small shoulder shudders
cold metal chills young skin
heavy gun
heavy heart
no past
no future
Mica Mahani
Draw me closer to the darker side of life
ReplyDeleteFeed me with lies and drench me in hate
Speak words of desolation, and tell me I have nothing
An objective to drag others down, to make yourself sane
What? A mental institution?
Take me with you.
Laura Bradley CIT053821