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Responses to Untitled by Matthew Tolcher.
ReplyDeleteResponse 1
This reflection
like poison.
Suns burning
erupting volcano
self-loathing
exploding
a wasted scream
endless
igniting like embers of
self esteem dying.
Philip Mudin
Response 2
Anything but blank this stare details
evolving, dreaming, dying, extinguishing hope.
Metaphysical made real and languishing
dark side manifesting,
hollowing an empty threat of suicide
congress of voices
demanding delusion
supplying a symphony of anguish written in flesh.
Diseased moon screams a testimony of
tranquility annihilated and
burnt beyond recognition.
Philip Mudin
An eye for an eye
ReplyDeleteThose I have murdered
Woman and children I’ve raped
The throats I’ve slit
The bodies I’ve burnt
Kids I’ve molested
All these angels have become my demons
Their terror has dug into my face
Their eyes are on a constant watch. Glaring through my skin
I foresee my end. They screams draw me closer to my downfall as my heart and every flesh gushes out my mouth
Silent and in death I remain
Mute
ReplyDeleteI open my mouth to speak
but no sound is heard
I hear
but no-one listens
I see
but no-one looks
I cry in agony
why wont anyone see me
Jodie farquhar
I see
ReplyDeleteI see paranoia.
I see pain.
I see my friend lost.
Eyes vacant
he is somewhere else.
Under the delusion that people are stalking him
he screams for them to stay away.
Hallucinating he picks at his face and arms
pulling out leeches where I see none.
I see the bizarre behaviour of someone coming off ‘ice’.
Like watching a sinking ship at sea
I know that I am powerless to help him
and that he alone must weather this excruciating self-inflicted storm.
Juliana Cieslar