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Response to Shiny Shiny by Evan Winterburn.
ReplyDeleteThe menu looks promising
Fine dining
in a fine restaurant
with fine people.
Fine, I don’t mind waiting.
Fine surroundings
in a fine setting
with fine views.
Fine, I’ll wait a little longer.
Fine friends.
Fine conversation.
Fine tunes.
Finally my food is here.
Is there a fine for serving cold food?
Hilarious use of the word fine Evan!
ReplyDeleteForeign food
ReplyDeleteSitting in silence with no words uttered
He glared at me with a warning.
Where am I?
Who are these people?
What are they speaking?
This is not my village.....my clothes! Where are my clothes?
Numb with fear as my bones trembled my mouth wouldn’t open to speak
Too scared to cry. He sat beside me. I could feel his breath on my face.
Eat! He said to me
Eat! We have a long journey ahead. We have to go meet important clients who will pay you money. He said
I looked down at the food in front me. My fingers trembling I reached for a fry. Hoping this food will give me the strength to scream or run. I kept digging in as slow as I could, praying time will stand still and that someone will smell the fear I reeked off. Someone please! Anyone!
He sits and he waits
ReplyDeleteIn a world that doesn’t care
Money, his money
Not a lot, but enough.
He sits and he waits
Food to comfort
Comfort from food
Served with a side of strangers